Top tips on writing your short story
by Natasha Brown

City of Stories Home

Taking place across all 33 of London’s library services from February to June 2022, City of Stories Home celebrates libraries as the place to make and share stories in our local communities. 

London writers Amer Anwar, Natasha Brown, Jarred McGinnis and Caleb Azumah Nelson have created read, think and do top tips to inspire you to write your own short story on the theme of home.  

Top tips on writing your short story by Natasha Brown

READ 

I recommend reading slowly: highlight, underline, and make notes. If a particular sentence or phrase stands out, try to explain what specifically affected you. How did it work? Was it the sound of the language, the choice of imagery, or perhaps the emotional payoff in a character arc? Same for if you dont enjoy a piece — try writing a few sentences about why it didnt work for you. 

Some suggested reading below. I’ve included some non-fiction and poetry in this list. Reading across genres and forms can help spark ideas. 

Wants by Grace Paley  

Girl by Jamaica Kincaid 

In a House Besieged by Lydia Davis 

Omasake by Weike Wang 

The Lottery by Shirley Jackson 

The Egg by Andy Weir 

revision by Victoria Adukwei Bulley 

Story of Your Life by Ted Chiang 

Terrific Mother by Lorrie Moore 

Frank Sinatra Has a Cold by Gay Talese 

Little Beast by Brandon Taylor 

THINK 

  • Start with shorter stories. It’s often necessary to throw away drafts and try new approaches or fresh angles on a story. Starting with shorter pieces can help to keep the sunk-cost fallacy at bay. Once you can ruthlessly ‘kill your darlings,’ go ahead and tackle longer pieces if you’d like. 

  • Get feedback from other writers or friends. Hearing how others respond to a piece of writing can help you to calibrate your approach. Was the writing clear? Are the character’s actions believable? Did the reader’s emotional response match what you had expected? 

  • Write regularly. It sounds obvious, but one of the best ways to learn about writing is to actually write. Don’t be afraid to experiment with different voices and styles — that’s what it’s all about. Have fun with it. 

  • Edit, edit, edit. Try thinking of a first draft as a starting point. A lot of magic happens during the editing process. Feedback can be especially helpful while editing. Does anything need more clarification? Less? Do you want to lean into an unexpected reaction (humour during a heavy moment, unease or awkwardness etc.)? Are there any accidentally repeated words or phrases? 

DO 

Take the first line of an existing story and write a new 300 word story continuing from it. 

Example prompts from the reading list above: 

  • “Your father is about to ask me the question…” (Story of Your Life) 

  • “In a house besieged lived a man and a woman…” (In a House Besieged) 

  • “You were on your way home when you died…” (The Egg) 

About Natasha Brown 

Natasha Brown is a writer who lives in London. In 2019, she received a London Writers Award in the literary fiction category. Assembly is her debut novel. 

www.npbrown.com  

Get involved with City of Stories Home 

Read all the short stories and get top tips on writing a short story at: www.spreadtheword.org.uk/cityofstorieshome 

Sign up for a free online creative writing workshop at: www.spreadtheword.org.uk/city-of-stories-home-workshops  

Enter your story to the competition with the opportunity to be published in the City of Stories Home Anthology, be part of masterclasses and read your story at a celebration event at your local library: www.spreadtheword.org.uk/city-of-stories-home-competition  

City of Stories Home is run by London Libraries in partnership with Spread the Word and is supported by Arts Council England and Cockayne Grants for the Arts. 

 

Published 12 January 2022